Mel, to comment on your poems individually would be difficult as I'd run out of superlatives. Suffice to say you're an extrordinarily mature writer for your tender years and a delight to read. If I may be so bold, delightful to the eye too. Best wishes, Jerry
Mel writes awesomely about her own experiences and those of others, sometimes so well that you cannot distinguish between the two! Raw and honest, she touches the heart and mind of her readers, as she gives them insight to her own world. Thankyou darling... (and she's just an all-round excellent person to dance the nutbush with in hallways) ! Xx