Mbanaso Samuel Comments

I do not know what you are trying to say here. I am not poetically analytical enough to comment on capitals or end rhymes, just to me your message is ocnfused and the language doesn't flow-but maybe you wanted the words to jar.Keep writng though.

Mbanaso's poems are quite impressive for a poet of his age. I also like his attempt at end rhymes as well as his first two stanzas beginning with capital letters and other lines in small letters as the experimental e.e. cummings did in his days. Keep writing Bro!