Hello, I am Meagan. I am new to this site and would greatly appreciate any comments you have or any constructive critisism. I am young and still learning what it takes to be a poet :)
As you lean down to kiss me, you cant see what your missing.
Its hard to know of your every move.
Swimming through an endless sky,
I watch as you pass by.
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The mind is our mystery, but full knowledge is there.
The aching in the world leaves my soul impaired.
I walk through the mist of my unforgetable past.
The people I love are moving too fast.
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Spin me 'round and 'round again,
Transfer us to way back when.
Slowly images become clear,
'I Love you' is what i hear.
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Silence is deadly?
That can't be true!
For a world of my own comes alive in my room.
I create a place,
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Preludes to the punchline and partial participation.
You aren't who you say you are.
It's sheek, we know.
Dance around the ideas and personal beliefs,
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