I'm a Filipina though i live here in Canada.
as of now im new to poemhunter.com! i hope to enjoy my stay here :)
Please do comment on my posts or poems.. i don't really know anything about writing poems or so i'm not perfect in speaking/writing english either. i just express my feelings into words. In that way(commenting, giving your opinion or thoughts) i can improve myself and i guess my writing skills (if i have one, hehe) .
Thanks you so much! :)
When I was cleaning my files i saw the first poem that i wrote (except the ones at school, i mean this was the first time that i really intended to write what i feel) . I'm trying to find the others which is not like a broken love poem or something. I'm trying to vary my poems so i can improve my writing. anyway here it is. -Thanks :)
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We met at the party
i didn't believe what i felt
but all i see is you
the first time we held hands
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As the moonlight hits your eye
Your smile shines through the nightsky
The stars were bright
When our lips gone high
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