im currently 22. i work with elderly people with dementia and i find poetry away of escaping most of the poems in which i write are about my feelings, i dont act upon them but writes it down instead. i hope you all enjoying reading them, i know some of them aint much good but i am gettin der and slowly improving my poem writing skills. i would also appreciate any feedback on my poems and on the ways in which they can be improved. thanks
by the railway lines she sits
with no-one but herself
slowly and deeply across her arms
with a sharpner blade she cuts
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suicide suicide in my mind
suicide suicide your my kind
suicide suicide i wish i was dead
suicide suicide im lead on my bed
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sat by myself no-one around
lonliness is here sat by my side
as i sit in the quiet room
my mind begins to wonder
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many things we want to say
but the words don't seem to come
when they do it's not the we planned
in our anger we let it rip
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