Hi. I'm currently doing a course in creative writing, so any criticism is greatly appriciated! And it goes without saying that I hope you enjoy these...Thanks, Lily.
Her hero's gone away,
Will he come back another day?
She could not say.
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My last few poems have been pretty dull,
All this self pity,
Quite unlike me,
It's not all bad,
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I miss you so much,
As if we were fresh young lovers.
Who would guess we've got nearly two years of history behind us,
That we're not actually together.
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Alone.
I sit here, confused, new to this,
Unwilling to be found out,
Hiding behind my computer screen.
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