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7/26/2025 8:59:35 PM # 1.0.0
I really liked this piece - it really evokes a lot of emotion - many girls with issues such as yours write poetry and it is very cathartic - I might have split up the first stanza into 2 - to make it a bit easier to digest, but that is only minimal - also - in the first stanza you had a typo misspelling their. But other than that- this was a great piece.