I'm currently a junior in high school so there is not much to me. Writing is something I love to do, whether it is a random story or a really bad poem. I'm experimenting with poetry (or trying to at least) and I just want to get some feedback.
When all seems lost, who do I turn to?
When I’ve lost my way, what do I do?
Two faces, both ingrained in my mind, never able to forget
You’re always behind me, your shadow my silhouette
...
You would think I would learn
But I never do, maybe that should be of concern
You would think I would realize
That if I keep after you, this feeling I feel will be my demise
...
Little jailbird trying to fly
Taking one day at a time, just trying to get by
Held back by the chains that surrounds you
You cry out for help too
...