I'm Kenny. I'm 18 years old, but i wrote most of these while during Army Basic Training.. feel free to comment.. i'm always looking for feed back...
I feel a cold chill on my back
It is like a glacier flowing
Every nerve a captive
Blood to ice, air is gone
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What humorous hole does thy departure leave
That it may only be filled by thy presence
Your voice causes my body to quiver
As does an icy river
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You are the love of my life
And none can compare.
But your sight is like a knife
It’s more than I can bear.
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It has long been said
For as long as it has been read
That it is better to have loved and lost
Than to have never loved at all,
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