I'm not a very good poet but i would like to get better so please comment on my poems and tell me what you think.
I hate to smile
I hate to laugh
I hate to giggle and grin
I hate to skip
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Oh how arrogant the birds are
Boasting their wings that soar across the open sky
Bragging of their freedom with chirping laughter
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Heart as dark as a lifeless night sky
Or a black sea, silent and still
And in this night sky she is falling
And in this black sea she is drowning
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People called them the perfect couple
Always cheery, Always smiling
Holding hands wherever they went
But through time he began to forget
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She does this
He says that
Tension builds in both wounded hearts
Someone yells
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