To every writer, a critique is a sign of friendship. In every friendship, there are differences in opinions. Opinions that we may or may not like to hear. Keep writing. Kay Barcelon :)
Rarely do you find your soul mate
You met by chance or by fate
Mind resists yet your heart dictates
Only in dreams this could exist
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Why do you wish to be a chameleon
And camouflaged with the rest
You are beautiful just as you are
And you do not need to blend
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Why do we hurt each other
Is it love or is it hate
Is it because we are far away
Or is it because we know
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