Greetings people! My name is Katherine Byrd. I enjoy reading and writing poetry quite a bit. Please read some of my poems... I am in high school and cannot let most people read what I write because they cannot comprehend its meaning. So, I do not know if my poetry is worth anything or not. Some comments with feedback would be nice and please do not judge my punctuation, I know it is probably mostly wrong.
I felt you with me;
Now no longer.
You have pushed me from the tree
But I've learned, it makes me stronger.
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I find myself in the same place,
Alone and terribly cold.
Just stuck in the same case,
Making me recall teary times of old.
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My heart was broken,
Shattered into millions on the ground, like glass.
To him it was a friendly token,
But I closed off and said ‘do not trespass.'
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It is evening as I sit alone
In the fading light, hearing a silent moan,
With only a little candle light.
I think of wanting love, the coming night,
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