well.. i just started writing few months ago.. i didn't know before this that i have the talent.. i'd be pleased if you commented/rated a poem for me.. thanks :)
Are we falling in love?
i was still thinking
I was looking for her
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As the sun flash instantly touches my eye
I look far to the whitened sky
As the sun rays light through the attached shiny cloud
I see your face smiling and laughing out loud
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I can notice the lights calling
I can hear the corruption falling
for every egyptian stands and fights
we'll have our rights.. we'll have our rights
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