This is incredibly sophomoric, naive poetry. This shows a complete lack of familiarity with modern poetry.
If a four year old wrote it, it would merit being stuck to the refrigerator.
This Poet is an MIA, a rapper, singer, trouble maker and a want-to-be. I challenge this poet to write about the blue sky, the beauty of love and the ignorance of some men and women. I am holding my breath, please write these poems asap.
This is very interesting. The best poem that one can only imagine. I love the blank page, the images, the misspelled words and the missing verbs. This poem is better than: Tomorrow at Dawn by Victor Hugo, It is Your Smile by Hebert Logerie, The Lake of Alphonse de Lamartine, Phenomenal Woman by Maya Angelou, Paradise Lost... I can go on and on. What a poem! Blank, Blank Page.
Keep on dreaming, bro. Sometimes, it is hard to reach the stars.
Interesting ode to one of my best loved libations!