I am now 16 started writing 2 years ago as a way of releasing stress found I had a sort of knack for poetry. So I have continued writing since and I hope that they are good enough to one day be published. I hoped that by putting my poems on this website I would receive unbiased feedback so rating them and comments are deeply appreciated.
Lost, scared and all alone;
Coldness creeps into your bones.
Fighting desperately to stay afloat;
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Your bright blue eyes so full of joy;
because of you I act like a man and less boy.
your love and patciance that you show me;
I can't fathom what in me you see.
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Lying close to you here in my dreams;
yet all alone here in the sceme of things.
The smell of your hair, the touch of your skin;
just lying here commiting no sin.
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Sometimes you get so mad;
sometimes things are just that bad.
Sometimes your so angry u start to sputter;
sometimes you just stand there and stutter.
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Watching the sun shine down between the clouds,
or petting a kind old hound, who's barkings is a musical sound,
Watching a storm in the night, as the thunder rumbles and lighting cracks,
When the leaves change their color, because water they lack,
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