I'm a 16 year old girl who simply enjoys writing as a past time, I always want to improve and i'm open to constructive critisism, so post ur comments! Thanx
I love you a bit,
Okay maybe a little,
Average sounds just right,
It’s somewhere in the middle,
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There is no sense to
A mess of jambled feelings,
A barrier to idealistic situations,
A crushing of stability
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This murky day,
A dreadful day,
One of mist and gloom,
Horror and doom.
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I stumbled upon this mirror,
I gazed into its depths,
The image inside confused me,
It danced about illogically.
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Sadness is the opposite of happiness,
it's the opposite of feeling free,
It's the opposite of joy,
It's the thing that's taking over me.
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