While your poems provide interesting perspective, their message seems to be trite with over use. This coupled with you poor wording leads me to belive that these poems provide no real insight at all, and are merely an echo of those that you percive as brilliant. Personaly, i belive that you need to develop your own voice as a writer.
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While your poems provide interesting perspective, their message seems to be trite with over use. This coupled with you poor wording leads me to belive that these poems provide no real insight at all, and are merely an echo of those that you percive as brilliant. Personaly, i belive that you need to develop your own voice as a writer.