Yes Jazib, you have expressed truth clearly and artfully. Well done!
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A great and very talented poet.......God bless you dear friend...///
Dear Poet-friend, Love/ a nice poetic utterane. The juxtappositions are thoughtful and ideational. Happy to know your way of expressions - - Desamangalam Ramakrishnan
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Nice, a revelation between the two Sharing in emotions. Bravo
Brother Jazib, The poem is incisive and divides asunder the two words. Thank you for sharing it.
i read and listen to your poems...very grateful you writing all of it.
O Urdu kay shayar - - tere kalam sey nikli nazam - -kamaal valii Jazib Alvi CANADIAN ME POET ME
Dear Sir, I love the poem, Since were are poets I am not critiquing you, I am only offering my comment. Since the poem is so long, it loses some of its energy during the comparisons between Love and. I would only go with about 10 examples picking the best ones and this would be a dynamite poem. Good Work. Not that you asked for my opinion but you did offer for me to read it. Thank you. J. L.
If only the people who need to understand this could do so. Perhaps enough people will be able to understand and convey your message that it will matter. Well written!