I don't write much. I'm mostly here for criticism on my work. I need to improve my writing skill, and get my thoughts and feelings down on paper.
The cadets go marching one by one,
Hoorah, hoorah!
The cadets go marching one by one,
Hoorah, hoorah!
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This place is my mind,
A prisoner, you are mine.
The gates are higher than you can see,
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I can't begin to explain,
Why I feel this way.
When I walk into a room,
I can't help but think of you.
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