Jameel Ahmed Ansari Comments

The first sight, a beautiful encounter. You could express your deep longings to see those eyes smile. Keep it up. Keep writing.

YOUR, POETRY, BORING, IT IS NOT - I WAS WITH YOUR EVERY WORD, ENJOYING THEM AS THEY WERE BITS OF FRESH AIR - ROBERT BURNS, PORTLAND, OREGON, USA

Thanks Lissa. I would surely love to read your poems too

Your poem is excellent. very insightful and profound.