you know...
your thoughts/feelings are written nicely...
but what you write shouldn't h urt/ruin other peoples lives, mkay? ...
try writing one about how everything is all in your head..the one you love is a friend and nothing more...
and stop embellishing everything for your own satisfaction....
there is NO us Ian...and has/will never be...
thanks :)
hate to sound harsh....(you know that's not me)
but, besides that...
you are a preety affectionate writer...
and of course with a vivid IMAGINATION :)
bye now...
take care,
paris
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you know... your thoughts/feelings are written nicely... but what you write shouldn't h urt/ruin other peoples lives, mkay? ... try writing one about how everything is all in your head..the one you love is a friend and nothing more... and stop embellishing everything for your own satisfaction.... there is NO us Ian...and has/will never be... thanks :) hate to sound harsh....(you know that's not me) but, besides that... you are a preety affectionate writer... and of course with a vivid IMAGINATION :) bye now... take care, paris