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I am a student in school who has just started to write poetry. I write to express my feelings and so everything you read in my poems is about what I feel or what I'm thinking about(at the moment I wrote it) . Writing poetry is my way of expressing emotions and ideas that I can't express aloud. I express my feelings by going into some other person's life, if you know what I mean. Please give me advice and constructive criticism to help me become a better poet, and I will ATTEMPT to do the same for you. No guarantees! Also ratings and favorite poems (that you select) will be appreciated! Thanks. :)
Reccomended Poems:
You, Angry At The World, Plead For Help, Fire, It's A Hard Life, Scream & ALL THE REST OF THEM
I ORIGINALLY WROTE THIS POEM IN 5TH GRADE AS A JOURNAL ENTRY. IT IS REVISED AND ALSO WHEN I WROTE THIS, I REALLY DID FEEL THIS WAY. THIS POEM IS DEDICATED TO ALL THE PEOPLE IN THE WORLD WHO ARE SUICIDAL\DEPRESSED. DEPRESSION IS not SOMETHING ANYONE SHOULD TAKE LIGHTLY. FEEL BETTER SOON.
Anger at the world…anger at the world
Nobody but me understands me
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The silence of the street
The airless atmosphere
The onset of a spray of light
Marks the completion of the previous night
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Sometimes I want to scream
I want to be set free
I used to cry out and yell
So my problems would fall
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She closes her eyes
Wanting to escape
This God-awful fate that was destined for her
The place she lives in, the air she inhales
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Perception-do you see me?
I don't think you do
It's so easy to fake through everything that you think I want to do
Rationalization-does it make sense?
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