I liked ur poem LAST JOURNEY.. but if i were in ur place, i would named it TRAPPED coz ur poem not very much describes about last journey or death, it more describes a condition, trapped condition, than death, ........
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I liked ur poem LAST JOURNEY.. but if i were in ur place, i would named it TRAPPED coz ur poem not very much describes about last journey or death, it more describes a condition, trapped condition, than death, ........