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Mom oh mom without you i am no one.
Whenever i needed u,
you were always there for me,
mom oh mom without you i am no one.
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I never thought i would have a bigger mother,
in the form of my sweet grandmother,
as she lives life to the fullest knowing life could end at any minute.
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God is the one unseen by anyone,
but he is the one felt within everyone.
He is the one who shows the light when its dark,
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Two lovers come together to show their love for each other,
on a day we all know as the valentines day.
The two lovers exchange gifts give each other a kiss
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I row my boat through the seas,
surrounded by the beautiful trees,
as i take in the majestic scene.
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