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hi everyone just on here trying to get some feed back on my poems.Iam not educated like alot of the poets on here but i hope some people can relate to what I write still.I was born in Blackpool(UK) but have lived in brighton for the last 4 years.
How glorious new beginnings are
Of love and life and laughter
You made your wish, you caught a star
It's happy ever after
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>let me live on my feet
let my head be held high
let me stand all the heat
and not to ask why
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Things are not always as they seem
Some people live life in a dream
They're hurting bad from yesterday
And times that are so far away
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The sky is dark but my candle burns bright
wherever i go so will my light
I am a small fire that began with a spark
You said that im blind, and should live in the dark
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brothers? who needs them?
mine were the worst
they mould you then scold you
and rub your face in the dirt
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