Im old and I write as a hobby. I wrote a poem for my wife and then another one. I know very little of poetry as of yet. please comment on my amateur work.
When I start my computer my
news feed pops up and I
can pick my own scare I
can choose between a corona-virus a
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The weather is great
the sun is shining
And out there is my rose
With a foxglove intertwining
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Ruwe bolster
Blanke pit
Hart voor rechtvaardigheid
Hard voor rechtvaardigheid
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The plane has already landed
My heart is beating faster
I’m getting anxious, nervous
Can’t wait to get off the plane
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Once upon a time there was a man
He was on a mission to become our savior
A mission of the likes never seen before
He would change the course of our history forever
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