hey, ur poems are relly good, especially my dearest soulmate, if u get an opportunity, could you have a read of one of mine? thanks and well done on great poetry
Hei I happened to read this and i enjoyed it. I ask almost everybody this but what inspired you to make this poem or song up?
I'm not sure how you managed to become number 1 in popularity here on poemhunter but well done. The only question I have is, why so many periods? Almost every line seems to end in '..............' is your period key sticky? did you spill something in there? Just curious. Take Care, -Hunter Dasten
To people leaving comments: I am both amused and baffled by the plethora of spelling errors in these comments. You are commenting on pieces of literature, and you can't spell simple words. To the poet: You have potential. However, I can't comprehend how you are only a few spaces below Robert Frost on the top poet list.
What so deep thought of a person you have the description of lonely live of doubtness were the feel get thorn apart.
wow, you are... amazing, i beleive you could become an author. i will not give you any advice because poetry is all about writing freely about your subjects. i would be honored if you read my poem, 'my life? or the lord's? ' and comment on it.
hi, let me introduce mine i am khoirun niam from the paradise island indonesia nice to see you
Darkness consumes, Darkness obtains, The reason why we are in tombs. Or stuck in the rain. Another soul like me. All captured, none are free. Your work touches me. Stuck in the darkness, No chance to flee. The truth is i admire you, You have lit my flame anew. And the only thing I can give you. Is a good luck, and a thank you
I think I like YOU....there's a certain sweetness there....but I'm unsure as to where I stand on the poetry....I'm not a fan of structured poetry that adheres strictly to ryhme schemes etc. and yours aren't that...but I don't know, I just find it simplistic and repetitive sometimes....having said that, I find it to be really alive.....you have confused me emo girl.I'm jealous of your popularity....maybe I'm lashing out :)
There is so much emotion in your poems. I hope you write some more. Obviously you're networked well in your school or country and you deserve to be. Meggie.
that was really interesting, in a good way. very deep, very nice. my sister, however didnt like it so much but who cares about what she thinks.
i like this poem. its KINDA like me lol.