I must say Captain A, you are fulfilling your purpose of waking up humanity in different aspects of life! ......... It was a wonderful experience to read your poems! , , , , , , And not to forget, since you are a Captain, your love for sea, can be very well seen in your poems! .............
Thank you very much for your kind comments about my poem Free Love. I shall read your poems with interest very soon, and of course kindly enter a comment. Pat Northall
We all know how sweet heart and kind you are Ellias. as we all know that you are trying to make changes we all will help you we all.....
Ellias is a gifted and sensitive writer with a keen sense of humor and irony that make his poems a pleasure to read. He is also an adventuous spirit attempting to learn, discuss and utimately improve our human condition through compassion and understanding. We are currently engaged in wrtiing joint adventures, which is giving me great pleasure and enjoyment. Fare thee well, young Ellias, Captain A, in your exploration of the Universe.
What I like about your work is that its to the point, and honest, its refreshing to see that someone actually is not scared to talk about these things, so many are even to scared to say anything at all, I applaud you on your work, also you are a brilliant poet as well, they may be short but it flows naturally well done....will do my best to read more...have a nice day and and live a long and prosperous life....and keep that ink flowing.
You being here with an idea, about ideal life that you dream to make everyone dream be not a dream, PEACE. You are gifted with good mind, wise and talent, I am glad you are here to share your honest opinion, my advice to you never stop believing that love can stop any hates, as peace is an essence for life, and happy so dont stop writing to promote peace or any write that encourage harmony in our life to people. You have talent to write, you have words to choose but only pick the best for all, may you can be an inspiration for many. Life is so short but what mean of life if we not giving what we have. Sometimes we lost sometimes we down but never take that as a way to fall and keep fall, challenge yourself to be better and hope your talent will evolve to be more wider, as you still have many times to expand the ability in you..I always has trust and you, and please never judge people with negative, its okay if we not win in any argument as long as we know we are together heading to the truth, must never give up. May God bless you and protect my friend, Ellias_Unwritten Soul
HI Ellias, I just received a wonderful compliment from you about my poem Take It or Leave It and I read about your philsophical approach through poetry to awaken the sleeping giant of giving the concious of mankind back to the people.Through poems we can enlighten the salt of the Earth to put their lifes in their own hands. I have written many poems of this nature as well. I thank you for your efforts and dedication to real life issues.By the way I am luckily as well a Lebanese American and enjoy the culture of the Middle East. There was a Persian poet from the 12 Century I believe that improvised his poems while dancing estatically and they were written down by scribes. Do you know his nmae perhaps? Greetings, Paul