I thingk it should be GLOOM AND DOOM! It must be the cause before the effect, right? Anyway, I salute to your talent bro.
You are such a good writer, don't let your poetry be limited by your name Blessings, Francois
You definately have a talent like few in the world my friend, but I'm worried about your soul. It cannot just be that you imagine these things you are writing. I think you must be experiencing them to be able to express it so vividly. May you find peace... 'For what does it profit a man if he gains the whole world, and loses his own soul? ' Mark 8: 36
Your poems are excellent. They're a great combination of grief and pain... I haven't really picked a favorite out of all of your poems, they're all to equal on the 'greatness' scale. Once again, excellent work, and keep producing such lovely poems.
I like your poems.......there great........pain and sadness is a great combination
As silent sheds silence I swear The less my weary heart must share I have the worst of fears it seems That man pines for his past extremes the pale color of man andrew michaels I appreciate your work, it is both doom and gloom, I shall read more of your material... best wishes, AM
I just happened onto your poems by accident and I think they are excellent. They get the message in a flowing, rhyming, easily read manner. As soon as I read the first one I liked it, then the next was equally good and so on. Thankyou for posting these.