Dani Baxter Comments

I love your poems, keep writing them, i love how blunt and sad they are, i love Childhood lost alot, its sad and very moving, i have written a few poems tob ut i have to say they arnt as good as yours, please keep writing

These poems are clearly vividly felt, and succinctly expressed. You say you write 'depressing, morbid, evil' poetry, but there is no need to assume your range will not develop. With some attention to form and grammar, great rewards could be reaped. I think the 1st piece: A Childhood... is the most moving, and has the strongest imagery.