Am a 21 year old who love's to speak his mind and heart through poetry. Tho am just but a boy when it comes to writting poems, i would appreciate it if you can vote and comment on were i need to improve with my poems
I have tried to hide my feelings toward you underneath my pillow
But they keep falling out
I have tried to rip out this immense affection
Embeded in my heart
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There has been a dawn of love in my heart
Ever since i had a glance of your adorable soul.
Like the blue sky
That grace the heavens
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Crying! ..in bits with the heart that wilt
A pain pours profusely in my life from the wounds of being alone!
As i try to heal
I only end up with a peal,
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