Hmm, to comment soley on your poetry wouldn't do you decency. So I shall comment on YOU. You have been through alot, and it comes out in your writing. All of the goods and bads you have been through have found a place on paper. You have a truley unique writing syle, and I hope you never change it. You are a very good poet, and I look forward to seeing more from you.
You have great style of writing, carefree, yet very logical!