Hey im 15 and i love poetry. If you dont like my poems im sorry, and if u do thank you. comment on what i do good, and what i need to work on. Im a nice guy feel free to chat with me and send me messages.
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when we met it was unpredictable like a shooting star
I will always love and accept you for who you are.
I love how your wierd and I totally get you,
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DREAM LAND
im in a dream world where its dark and always night,
just a dirt road with nothing in sight.
nothing but sorrow, cries and screams,
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They say before you commit suicide, you should reflect back on your life ride
so i lie hear as i start to cry tears, thinking back to my fears, forget thinking i'd rather just die here
but before i take eternal rest, i sit down at my desk, and write a fresh, good-bye letter, saying how i wish my life was better
i read back to my self what i wrote, about how i wanna croque, ive always been good at writing sad notes, i sketched a smiley face on it as an ironic joke
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im sorry to you all but i must say good-bye
ive done nothing but failed, now theres no use to try
the only fair option is to die
when your a fallen angel all theirs left to do is die
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I hate you all
when i dropp the ball
i guarantee that i see you all fall
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