Bilal Raja Comments

'Potential turns to waste' Often this is how I feel. I try and try but never to the fullest I know I am capable of being. This rots me inside until I realize (or moreover remember) that man is lazy, all of man, and somehow as I am sitting with my wine staring at the moon whilst it rises full blown from the east I can be more satisfied than those with millions and those who don't have the wisdom to love and understand others. Good poetry, keep writing.

Of your poems I like this the best :) Only thing i would chage would be from: 'And now you must do the same' to 'Now you too must do the same' (for some reason it fits better in my head) But that's just my opinion :)