I am sixteen and love hearing comments and advise i do not belive i am a talented writer i just write about feelings and experiences and such so critisism is welcome and if anything suck feel free to tell me haha
to feel all alone
to wish for something
to knock on the door and nobodys home
and want to give something
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If you break my heart
youll stain the sky red
not in hate or in rage
but in the love that i have
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a light fog on a cloudy day
the moss softens the round bolder for my back and feet
i lay here thinking
the cold morning air numbs my skin
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