Anu Joshy Comments

Good poem. There was a little suspense in the beginning when the narrator, i don't have a better word, asks her mother to spare her so that she could feel her touch, listen to her. Then it suddenly becomes clear in one line: Is being a girl a crime? I was quite surprised but then it all made sense too and was moved too.

nice poems.. but lacking flow in many places.. and sometimes appears too superficial..