I am not very good at poem but I do like to write poem when I am bored and when I want to express my thoughts and pain through word. So yeh, Please comment on my poem that would be great. I am not a professional so please dont be too harsh, also English is not my first language too.
Myself, that word scared me,
I hate myself like nothing else,
I used to be something I want to be,
But living in this world is hard to be free,
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Me,
Staring at the ceiling,
Not dare to close me eyes,
Fear that I will be vulnerable to the nightmares thats about to reach me,
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Me, myself and I,
What more can I say?
What more can I be?
Everyone seem to hate me,
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Why Why Why
Why am I still loving you
When I truely know your just a liar
Deep emotions builds up from within
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I never I could love someone so much,
I never knew I could love you this much,
Everything you do,
Wrong or Right,
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