I am not very good at poem but I do like to write poem when I am bored and when I want to express my thoughts and pain through word. So yeh, Please comment on my poem that would be great. I am not a professional so please dont be too harsh, also English is not my first language too.
                Myself, that word scared me, 
I hate myself like nothing else, 
I used to be something I want to be, 
But living in this world is hard to be free,
                
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                Me, 
Staring at the ceiling, 
Not dare to close me eyes, 
Fear that I will be vulnerable to the nightmares thats about to reach me,
                
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                Me, myself and I, 
What more can I say? 
What more can I be? 
Everyone seem to hate me,
                
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                Why Why Why
Why am I still loving you
When I truely know your just a liar
Deep emotions builds up from within
                
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                I never I could love someone so much, 
I never knew I could love you this much, 
Everything you do, 
Wrong or Right,
                
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