Hello my name is Anne and I am new to this site. I am looking to recieve some feedback on the poems that I write. I have always had a love of writting and never wanted to share because I was afraid that they wouldn't be good enough to be read. I am trying to get over this and would appreciate everybodies feedback. So if you leave me a post thank you in advance. This is very exciting for me.
The road I travel is windy and unsafe
Filled with road blocks and things to slow me down
Constantly seeing a stop sign
One day the signal will turn green and I will push my foot on the gas
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Standing alone on the battlefield
Waiting for the fight
Afraid of what is to come
Not knowing how to fight this battle so that I can win
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The Sun hits the water making it sparkle like gems
Blue sky above as the sun peaks through the sky
The gentle sounds of the waves washing up on the shore
This is a happy place
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Alone in my room
Feeling every emotion possible
Not knowing what to do
The emotional pain keeps building
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The tears fill my eyes as I look to release the emotions that are building from within
I feel alone and scared in my own thoughts
The wonder in my eyes leave me anxious
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