Your poem well captures the mind of a reader. You have very well described the loss of temper that caused the discord in your love relation. Well done Didi.
It is a very beautiful poem, tragic story appears to be real.
You have shared so nice a poem Madam. Thanks for the great passion you have put into it. So neatly furnished poem.
Thanks dear Anita for your genuine interest in poetry. I feel proud of you.At last someone or sormething could inspire you to compose poetry.
Thanks for your beautiful poems.100 ++++++3