anais says she spends some early a.m.s writing and caffeine imbibing. If she keeps it up, and if she desires it, I think she could earn a living at writing her poem-stories. It is often a delight to read her stuff here, which I've only done since I 'discovered' her quite recently. ;) bri
An excellent poem of beauty and wisdom, yet carefully balanced with realism
Flawless Poetry! Like Adrian mentioned, there is a straight sense of verses
I like the good straight sense of your verse. Also the admonition we in this generation deserve.
'You aren't doing your homework, you haven't cleaned the planet, You aren't standing up to bullies' - largely true and deserves the admonition meted out.
Thanks Khairul, but no one listened