Amy Comments

I wrote a lot of poems Do accept my poems

hi amy like you love is poem it is good nice works ps here is my number 404-357-0425 call

A most promising young poet, with excellent technique. Only gripe is some occasional switching from 'you' to 'he' which may be easily amended if you wish. Just keep on writing (or typing or whatever) . Overall excellent.

Welcome to PH... I've enjoyed your solid lyrical collection thus far... so this is just by way of friendly encouragement... and I add....more please..