Hey, Allen...I sent you a message earlier today about your poem Choices. Could you email me back with your thoughts. Thanks.
great poem boy. nice image at your profile with your gf
Mr Steble, you write with such simplicity about the common experiences in life. Your work reminds of that of Sylvia Plath and Emily Dickinson. Simple poetry, written sublimely.
Mr Allen Steble is being now ranked as the most popular PH poet as per the rating of June 2013. He is a fine poet with a lot of insight into man`s life and his social disposition. Mr Allen, as he says, is a motivational poet with a vision for universal human love and even his humour poems have been written with a tell a tale purpose. Mr Allen`s diction is fair and simple without bombastic expressions and the multiplicity of his themes and universality of his philosophy of life have got the glitter of a rare blend. He is young and dynamic and can therefore deliver much more ahead. I wish Mr Allen many more innings over here and hope him to keep his going high.
The Breeze Blows. Interesting that in the third verse, and observing limitless heavens in silence, the writer says that it is the last time of sensing the breeze. Is it that he dies, or that individuality is morphed into the great Cosmos. Everything is certainly much bigger than the writer, and he knows it.
I love fire and talk about it alot in my poetry. Try reading my poem, I am Fire. I think you will like it and it might give you a new perception of your own poem. :)
this is a good poem that reminds that we all should never get up and keep the inner motivation and courage in our heart.
hi, thanks for such a nice comment and for appreciating my poem.you are the 1st reader.by the way your poems are more than just a poem and is touching.honestly.thanks again. take care. S R.
write more about yourself