Hi, i am a student. I write occasionally whenever some ideas cross my mind and/or whenever i have the time.
Please provide me with your valuable criticisms so that i can improve over time.
I always try to incorporate some messages into my poem and feel really happy when other readers appreciate what i tried to convey.
The child looked intently into my eyes
And to my surprise started uttering words of despair
Words which sent a chill down my spine
Showed me memories containing my terrible wrongdoings
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The beautiful game is liked by one and all
Such is the captivating nature of football
The game unites many, but can also push
Countries into war, hostility and agony
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My lady luck strode towards me majestically yet gracefully
She was, to me, the very epitome of female beauty
Her white robes dangling from her bare slender shoulders, fluttering gleefully in the wind
Her black flowing hair dancing as if they were whispering playfully to the air surrounding her
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