I am a 14 year old girl, from India and I'll be 15 on 27th November 2013. I write poems but I know that I don't write them properly and also not so well. So, Please help me by advising and correcting my mistakes. There are so many dreams of mine, as you can see in my very first poem 'So Many Dreams'. I want to become a great poet, writer, painter, singer (if possible) .
and i just want to entertain people by my poems....and want to make the world and its people feel that..... Yes God Is One and the Religion which are made by God's children can not divide us...! .... I want to give a new message in every poem of mine.... which can help the world to change a little but Forever...!
:) Thank You...! :) :) Keep Smiling :)
Once there was a dog named Snoppy,
He was so loyal to me.
Whenever I was there with him
his heart would leap up. he-hee.
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Once I was getting very much bored
I asked my mind what to do dude
He said 'Sit quietly, doing nothing,
spring comes and the grass grows by itself'.
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I don't know why he do that?
Which he should never do,
Why he let his parents out
Of which I'll never think about!
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Simply its so beautiful
As you have made all these things.
You knew, whom to give legs to walk,
And To whom to give the wings.
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Once I was standing near the road
Watching the ones who passed by.
Thinking one day when i'll go Abroad
And i'll talk to the foreinergs like hi and bye!
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