Afrooz Jafarinoor Comments

Dear Bill, I feel Like a happy child enjoying so much love and support from my poemhunter family!

Just speak from the heart my friend. it is emotion that rules in poetry, the first steps of a child are remembered and cherished over the latter. I do like your poetry.

I do teach English, dear Nathan, but I can never claim mastery over the language as a native speaker may have! Relax, there's no mistake! I've asked to be tutored!

My mistake! If you teach English, why are you asking me for help? Your problems might be intentional!

You asked me to correct your English. Mostly small or minor problems, overall! I think you're improving, or you're already very good!