my name is adrian barrientos. im 17 gunna be 18. im just a regular kid. i go to skool have a job and hangout with friends. i write peoms from time to time. i know they arnt the best but im not looking to be the best poet. i write to convert my feelings on to paper. so i can see a visual of wat i feel. thats all. but i love to get feedback. and thanx for reading my poems.
i catch my breath, breathe in breathe out
spending all this time trying to figure out
should i say hi?
ask your name or just walk by
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how do we learn to love
is it passed from your mom and dad?
or is it something we always had?
is love always the same?
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our love is a dangerous
it's like a bullet sitting in a gun waiting for someone to pull the trigger
breathe in and surrender
maybe one day this will all be better
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feelings into words
thoughts into a verse
running through the endless space in my mind
hurry! quick! write down this one line
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